Friday, 26 September 2014
Blog #1 Camping Experience
The wind was silent and the fire was crackling, the aroma of
marshmallows filled the air as chocolate and graham crackers are passed
around. Laughter echo’s in the woods as
jokes and stories are told, memories brought back. Embarrassing moments brought back, cheeks
filling with pink as my cousin’s laugh at my brother. The moments are appreciated though, since
they only last awhile until they are forgotten.
The taste of chocolate melts in my mouth as a take a bite and watch my
dad make a s’more for himself. My uncle
chugs a diet coke like its water, the dare he accomplished after barely making
it through without burning his throat.
Everyone stares waiting for him to complain, no one could take
themselves seriously and we all burst out laughing. The leaves start to dance as the moon’s light
bounces off the ground emitting all the stars real beauty of looks. Each one making the sky beautiful as everyone
admires the sky while the fire engulfs the cooking marshmallows bringing
everyone back to the smell of burning marshmallows. My dad and cousin blow on the marshmallows
trying to save the sweets while everyone else laughs at the panicked
faces. As the words are spoken
‘marshmallows are always good no matter what’ my cousin pops it in his mouth
then suddenly he stares waving his hand of his mouth as everyone starts to cry
of laughter. The fire slowly burns down
and the moon takes over the night, yawns are passed around and eyes start to
slowly close. Water is thrown into the
fire and everyone says their good nights as memories are once again captured
and kept silent. The trees stay up all
night dancing in the wind while my cousins, Uncle, dad, and brother sleep
soundlessly. I slowly close my eyes and drift to sleep.
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Brianna,
ReplyDeleteGood job, I like the style that you used to write this. Your voice really comes through, it is a little short though, watch your word count.